THE SECRETS. *foam at the mouth*

It's okay that you took a while, I hate that someone gave you grief over your writing though. Feh on them, they don't have to like it. I actually like this chapter, nothing really going on, but a bit more light is shed. I like how it's intense one moment(the Paris parts) then we jump into Maxxie's POV, which was hilarious by the way. I laughed right before the part that said don't laugh. I really hate how Cassian just let himself be taken in by these guys ideals, no wonder he's so scary now. I can't wait to see what gets revealed next chapter! Thanks for the awesome update!

Aww, I'm so happy you updated! I was worried for a moment there. Glad you liked my first review too, tee hee.

So. For this chapter. I was actually insanely curious about the past too, so this was absolutely satisfying. I HATE how Celine got into his head like that, and I get mad that he let himself be talked into thinking that way. I just want to smack him upside the head, so smug! I guess that means I'm really enoying it?

The part about Marcus was pretty interesting too. Poor guy, he was really into Heather. It was kind of cute and odd and funny at the same time. And poor Michael! You can see it's like it's about to be a train wreck here.

Last but not least, I'm guessing Michael and Cassian are sharing the spotlight in this story? That's cool with me, even though I'm already sitting in Michael's side of the stands.

So anyway. Thanks so much for updating, can't wait to see how Maxxie and co. are faring~!

this is so got damn interesting and well written

Okay, so let me start by saying, 'will all the Michael fan girls please raise their hands...?

lol that aside, this is really good! It's funny, the cracks are on time and have made me snort a few times. There's a very intriguing story going on beyond all this, I'm curious about the fathers, and the healers, and how exactly poor Heather died. Can't wait for the next chapter. :3

I have to say that I think your story is really great!

love the vampire lore. Its a bit confusing, like how heather and michael stay alive for so long as humans, but only makes me more interested in future chapters.

Wonderful as always! Sorry I haven't been around to review more - things have been hectic. But the story has been picking up speed perfectly and I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings!

It's actually not the second largest country in the world.

Also, you should start a new paragraph everytime someone else starts to speak.

PLEASE GO ON!

I LOVE IT!

Great chapter! Well worth the wait!

I hope you had fun while you were abroad :)

Like it so far! Though I am kinda confused about whats happening. Anyways update soon!

P.S. Just for future reference, it would be better if you spaced out the stuff in italics because as of the moment its kinda hard to read.

How is it possible this story has so few reviews? I realize we're only 3 chapters in, but come on, people!

This has entirely captured my interest and you've got a real knack for writing. I can't wait to see what comes next! :)

Nice siblings. What do these flashbacks have to do with the present setting in the story?

This seems like a pretty cool and interesting story. I hope you continue with it and ch.3 comes out speedy fast! :-)