WHAT?

you can't b serial that this is the end!

there better b a sequel or i will have to find u and kill u! jk but really that is an awesome story..

could have been longer but whatevs.

LOVED IT!

hiya, im a friend of sams,

i love that story soo much, i think you've got an amazing talent... keep up the good work... i've just stared using this site... my book is called slightly smart... do you think you could have a read of it for me... i dont mind any comments (constructive and good) thanks

anita a.k.a sams friend

Aw! That was the sweetest chapter ever! N'aww! I'm glad she remembers and is there with Clay again :D

Oh. Well screw that. Bye-Bye.

We are a leading company that wholesales Adidas shoes, brand shoes

,bags,caps,watches ect. such as Ipod nano, lv bags,caps,nike shoes,

air jordan series(1-22),air force1,air max series,shox series,

ape bapesta shoes,adidas shoes puma shoes etc. We have different colors,

fashionable designs for your choice. Top quality with a reasonable price,

Our product sell well all over the world,.And we also can make according

to your we accept mixed order. we also accept sample orde.

we have good relationship with many companies,we have good after sell

service and dispatching goods fast and safe,so if you are interested in it,

feel free to contact us:

web: /

Fantastic story as always. I wouldn't begrudge you a summer vacation, but don't forget about us here... hanging on by a hope and a prayer that you update soon!

I love how Conan, using the name Lochlannach is gently pushing Darien to remember.

I don't know why you were unsure about this chapter, it's great :D!

This is great. The 'you sound like my mother' bit was so ironic and sad! Can#t wait for the next chapter!

Darien's forgotten that Gessica is... well, who or rather where she is. The line about about Gessica sounds like her mother was one of those gut twisting ironies. Poor Darien, has to go through the experience of learning about her parents' fates, yet again.

And then the visions that she has when she sleeps... seeing Clay must have been heart wrenching!

And then the new students... how forboding!

As always, I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

How sad! I makes you want to scream at Darien, "Just remember for crying out loud! If you remember even after they erased your memories, then it is meant to be!"

I wonder if she's going to be driving home and realized that she never introduced herself, but that Clay had called her by name.

I love the emotion that you put into each of your characters. Keep up the good work.

D: Poor Darien, that was sad! Update soon!

aw thats depressing!

Good chapter as usual, but I feel like I missed something along the way. I have a ton of questions, that if answered would probably lead to even more questions. Where did the four days go? Why would Clay not offer Darien solace? Was he trying to distance himself from her? What exactly were they talking about when Yvaine asked Sophia if it had ever happened before? If Darien was half shifter(or what ever they are), then wouldn't that put her in a different catagory from normal humans? Who is in the vision? And that's just a few questions running through my mind.

Even though I hate cliffhangers, I look forward to seeing the answers come up over the next few chapters. Keep up the good work.

I loved this chapter, there seemed to be more of a vulnerablity about herwith the whole 'Gessica please come back' sort of thing!

:O at the ending! Update! I need to know what happens next! Like NEED to!

OMG! never saw that coming!