Reviews for When She Breathes
xrawritskalix chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
You did a really good job on this, especially since you had a limited amount of space. I hadn't realized that it was a school assignment when I read it. It's a really good storyline. It was really easy to follow. I would've liked it more if it was longer, but since you were limited, I can't be upset. Keep up the good work!