|Reviews for find a penny|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
I loved the opening imagery of putting sunlight into jars - it’s such a happy, delightful imaage, I can image someone doing it. I also liked your ending (you have a way with ending things on a strong note, by the way) with putting penny’s face up.
I feel like this poem was incomplete though; you had a lot of build up but not a lot of release. I was left wanting more.
| letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
But obviously I'm warped... I mean I know it's 'moonshine' thats alcohol, but I kind of see that 'sunshine' could be... yes, I'm definitely warped!
But dont worry, I can see the lovely side meant! ]
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
LOVE this! It's such a beautiful idea and you did it all wonderfully, what with the olden days golden pat, then modern influence, but then the place and time to stop and smell the roses! If that's understandable... :)
I love the ending, actually i love it all... :)
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
I LOVE the concept behind this poem! The first stanza especially I adore the idea of sunshine being poured into jars and handing them out, like your giving out happiness, and the last paragraph you're giving people luck.
How lovely, wonderful, and just greatly optimistic.
Favorite for sure :)