Reviews for Of Cabbages and Kings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love their dynamic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Jake. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More amazingness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh I can already tell I am going to LOVE this! |
![]() ![]() Just a quicky. Love story. Love your descriptions except the gross ones. The only thing I don't like is I feel that you have Jake's attitude forced in order to stretch the story though I hope I am wrong but that is the vibes I get from reading this. There is nothing wrong with love drama as long as there it's either resolved a chapter or two later or there is a compromised. I hate soap opera fics which this better not be one as it will suck that a wonderfully written fan fic gets the soap box in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story, sequel maybe? D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely LOVED this story. It was amazing! You, my friend, are such a good writer it makes me want to cry! I loved Jake (And the *special scenes* lol :3) You should make a sequal! Just for me and all the other people who have read this wonderful story! ~SkittlesKat~ |
![]() ![]() chicka this story was fan-freaking-tastic! i actually stayed up all night to read it in one sesh! definitely tell me where to get a jake during the zombie apocalypse :) but hon, i'm going to need a sequal! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved reading this story. You mixed horror, suspense, romance, tradgedy, and even humor all together. My only complaint is that the dialouge can be a little confusing to read. Other than that it is incredible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was freaking fantastic! I loved it! Damn, if a zombie infestation ever does come down under, I want to meet a Jake of my own :) Great job! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh lol i feel dumb now. Well i read chapter 16 and i like the story but i do feel like it leaves more questions than answers. Do they ever find the others? And what about the rest of the world? Idk great story though i really like the characters and how everyones relationships to one another change as the story progresses. I also like that Cj wasnt a complete wuss the whole story and at the end she was strong enough to kill her best friend. GREAT JOB! |
![]() ![]() HOw is it complete? yOu siad there the next chapter would be happier. Does Jake survive? Does he find her? Do her injuries kill her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! I wonder if they survived... and they still have to repopulate! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, I have a serious case of ambulothanatophobia. I HATE zombies; movies, books, or otherwise! I was reading your story last night, getting mind-fucked by zombie imagery. I'm surprised I didn't have a nightmare! DX Love the story though. I'm not sure about reading more zombie stories... I guess I could try, though. D: |