|Reviews for welcome to the emerald city|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
this is honest, raw, and vivid.
i loved reading it.
| D. Cowman chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
this is a fantastic piece of literature. you're smart, i can tell by the subjects you tackled in this poem.
"kids tell lies to waste time while adults sit back and/laugh at things they don't understand"
my favorite part is:
"...tried digging our toes into the ground...but the dirt was made from centuries"
| Isca chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
"Tried digging our toes into the ground to spread our roots." Wow. What a brilliant and creative idea. :)
"So we sold ourselves to the Devil." Powerful 'turning point' in the poem.
"It's not this place." I don't know what it is about this line that attracted me, but I like it nonetheless.
"How the hell do I get home?" Excellent ending. :)
| MargaretGraves chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
This is beautiful, just genius. Wouldn't change a single thing- I LOVE the first two stanzas... "with faces like ghosts... the dirt was made from centuries"- gorgeous. :]