|Reviews for High School Crush|
| arcillateressa chapter 1 . 9/7
She is strong but not in the way most people
She loves more than she'll ever get back and she
knows it, and yet she loves anways
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
LOL thats cute
| Aaron chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
this is so awsome can i use it in a song?
| nikki chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
its so sweet wish he knew i loved him
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
very good i couldnt stop reading
| Justme chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
My all time favorite, from the first time I read it I fall in love with ur poem
| XxXOoO chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Oh my gosh~ xD
That was amazingly sweet :D
Love ur poems ]
| CursumPerficio chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
I love how it sounds like an actual high school student with the small slang and behaivor ("...for that stupid math test") ("I'm so fusterated I can almost cuss)...but how poetic it is at the end, like a high schooler's dream.
My favorite lines are "Around you I’m burning up, But without you I’m shivering." and "When the war is lost you make it seem like I’ve won." They're really big differences, but united in such a fitting way :) I also like in the beginning where you described how the crush made the character feel from hugging, to his legs going weak (Great transmission!)
Keep up the good work!
How It All Ends
| fairytalefantasistx3 chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
Nice! I really like this :)
I absolutely love these two lines:
'Around you I’m burning up,
But without you I’m shivering.'