Reviews for The Forgotten Pathway
Aoide's Anthem chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
This is a great piece that I can personally relate to...many people tend to think that if a person is "outnumbered" then they are wrong. On the contrary, it is essential to stand up in the face of others who choose to take the easy way, etc.

The word choice is extremely lyrical and liberal. I would say to be more adventurous, and break free of this simplistic structure (not necessarily within this piece). Experiment! Have fun with different rhyme schemes (or lack thereof) and meter.

Keep writing!