Reviews for the green and honey golden child
AnonymousAffirmation chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
This has to be one of my favorites. Kudos.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
I like this. The second stanza especially stands out to me, about how poets shouldn't be beautiful. I don't really understand some of your comma usage, though. A lot of them come at places where they aren't really necessary. But again, you probably have your reasons. Hmm, yes, this is nice. Keep writing! :)