Reviews for On Stage
Q75 chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
Threw me a new one right at the ending, that you did.

At first, I was like 'a breakup scene?'

ahhh, it's a break up scene where someone's being all melodramatic sending a monologue while the other's mute and in deep pain.

and then it turns out to be a play.

good one. HAHAHA

In a way, you made readers be a part of this poem, so we are the people watching the thing, we are the audience, who applaud at another's tragedy, and if we say we 'can relate' can we really relate? or are we making presumptions?

and if you're a writer, aren't you 'using' people? using their sadness, their stories, their feelings to gain applause?

deep. atleast that's what I think.

all in all, I liked this poem cause it made me think. (and sorry, I sometimes tend to overanalyze)
BraydenKrell chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
As both a writer, and an actor, this poem really appeals to me. Well done!
Dreamy-Wish-Girl809 chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
I abosolutely loved it! Very interesting. I liked how you didn't know it was all a play till the very end. If you do a lot of stories or poems like this, look up the word 'plaudits' in the dictionary. I LOVE dramatic pieces. Continue writing, you're good at it.
lymli chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
wow, I like the metaphor about being a thief.