Reviews for Write it out this way
Written chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
your poetry is just too good. so few words but bright, almost painful images you put in my head!
lymli chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
I like the message in the ending about future can't be known.
qubed chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
i agree, for the most part. except, i would have said 'irrelevant' instead of 'inadequate'. but that's just me.

fantastic job, patron. (: