|Reviews for An ode to my neighbours|
| Counting Luv Toxic Stars chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
omg i love this one, i have some obnoxious college guys across the street and let's just say i can relate a bit ]
| spider-wall chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
Um...okay. Interesting. Interesting and random. I like it!
"They turn on some tunes and are singing along
(The worst part is that it's a terrible song)" -
I think it would be more effective if you reversed that, so that the second line says: "The worst part is that they are singing along." Much funnier, I think.