Sorry me again, brains fell out. Again, what a fabulous one-shot. Echoing a previous comment - you get these characters so well in such a short space of time. And their interactions just flow so smoothly, so believably. You write brilliantly! Apologise for fangirling but see first sentence.

that was just, cute.

i love this line: "bed or floor? do that again and it's floor."

not gonna say to write more soon, because ive seen ur profile and if i said it you might NOT update. but thanks. :)

I really liked this. Sickly sweet and it works perfectly. Ace.

Aw. That was sweet. I thought I'd try you out and I liked it! I'll have to keep working down the list.

That has got to be the sweetest thing ever.

I so wish I had something better to offer than "this is amazing" or "I love it so much". Both of which are true, just not particularly helpful in any sense. Maybe that's inaccurate. Ego's go gaga for that type of stuff usually. Maybe yours does too? Hm... Anyway, I enjoyed the piece, how there wasn't a lot of background (though I have to go read the base-piece now _) and yet everything made so much sense. I love their interactions and the diolgue (both internal and external). Nice. Cheers!

F-f-f-freaking awesome! The ending made my week. X]

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i LOVE this line:

"coffee, black, two sugars. Ten sugars. Scalding hot"

one word: woah

:) Yays. That was cute. But um... Peanut butter and beer? Seriously? o_O

Will there be anymore one-shots? :o I like Nicky and Joey.