Reviews for A Wolf's Pride
G2G chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
jmr79au chapter 50 . 9/3/2010
Another fantastic story written. And this is the best one of the 3. Maybe you could write a book about some of the children.
Gwengwel chapter 50 . 9/1/2010
Just finish!

Yeah!! snif! It's finish!

I have so much fun reading about all of your personages and their adventures.

Your three woman are strong, intelligent and don't let their guys being the MAN-IN-CHARGE without fighting. Too much fic have crybaby girly woman. It's was I fear at first with the resum of A wolf's duty (traumatised woman), I'm so glad that I try, nothing of this sort here. No Marysue too.

The couples are all different but they all manage to entertain me, captivate me. I prefer Ryan/Chloé, who's the one who act like me the must and it's not necessary a good thing loll.

You obviously have a plan and notes before starting writing your stories and it's show. I didn't see the common faults that debutant writer do (blue eyes chap.1/brown eyes chap.7, perso A say something to perso B chap.1/ perso A say the exact same thing to perso B chap.7 but perso B didn't know it, etc).

The universe you create's logique, rich and credible. You make me want to live with them, they seems real.

A really big thank to you. You're really a gift writer and you're bless with a powerful mind and a vivid imagination.


P.s. As you can read on my profile, I'm native in French, so if you dontt understand something or if I make a lot of faults, I'm sorry.
Gwengwel chapter 38 . 9/1/2010
I'm going to write a bigger review when I finish this one but I have a question about this chapter.

When she say she's a size 14...Where I live (Québec) it's for size person (bordeline obese to obese). I don't think that it's the case here, I see her more with round courb than fat. I am wrong?

I try to found a understandable conversion table, but was not succesful. Maybe if I knew how tall she is and his weight. If it doesn't bother you.


pendragone96 chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
Um...all of the chapters you put up are only have the first two chapters and then it skips to the last two chapters. I have read your other stories and I was excited to hear about Ryan, but I don't understand any of what happened. Can you please look into this to see if you can fix it? Thanks!
ReadWriteLive chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
I just completed your first two stories (instead of doing my homework...) and I am sorry to hear about your problems with plagiarism. I do hope it won't stop you from putting up this third story though!

The only thing that's really bugged me so far is this:

Alex was very determined to finish university (enough to put up with daily abuse) but then, with just a little left, she went to live with her mate. If you every rewrite, could you consider putting in her finishing (even if it's long distance or something)?

Hope to read this third one, I'll keep it bookmarked!
ElissaSilver21 chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
Hey! Just wanted to say that I love this series! I've only read the first and the third so far, but of course plan to read the second. I was wondering, are you planning on reposting the rest of the story? I miss being able to re-read my favorite parts. Again, love the story!
AJ Skinner chapter 1 . 8/27/2010

I originally found your work on Authonomy and loved your first two stories. I have even ordered A WOLF'S DUTY through your profile page. I am hoping however that you will be added more of Ryan's story to this site.

Amy J
Mrs Sorbo chapter 5 . 8/24/2010
I am so glad that bitch took your story down, i mean seriously the talentless hoe... lol (i'll just ignore the fact that i can not write for crap).

I didnt read the ammendment to your plagiarism note - it just makes me angry that there are people out there that are so selfish as to take such fictional brilliance as yours away from those whom would otherwise enjoy it, or enjoy it and give the benefit to one of such low character.

I think you know that I'll be messaging you if i ever see your stories or characters elsewhere - I owe you for getting me through my first semester of uni after all - i may have died of boredom otherwise.

But Im glad to see its been taken down and I urge you to continue seared by desire as I quite enjoy it (understatement).

Ok so I hope you are otherwise doing ok

From a fan. Jayne
sw33tdaisie chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
your stories are already copyrighted right? because u publishes them? i think you need to write onto each chapter that your stories are copyrighted so it will stop anything like this from happening in the future...just a suggestion
LittleMacster chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
That is absolutely terrible that someone would plagiarize your work! I am so sorry that you were forced to put most of your stories down, because I love these stories and re-read them all the time. I hope this is sorted out soon, because it would be a shame if you had to take these stories off for good. Again I apologize that this happened, and I hope everything is fixed soon. I also hope that this doesn't discourage your from writing because I love your stories.
DNAstar chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
why would that person do that really? i love your storys i reread them all the time now i cant read them *sad face* hope you can put them up again soon.
Off Key Reason chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
She seems to have removed it, or the site did anyways. I greatly apologize and I understand how you feel.
dramalover21 chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
Ironic that this is happening now considering a person, from the same site you gave, was found to have plagarized another popular story on FP, "Swish" by Lovelyhead. When she found this out, she messaged said person, asking that he or she take down the story from that site. They did, so hopefully, once you've contacted this person, he or she will do the same. Sorry that this is happening :(
MHolloway chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
i'm SO sorry this happened to you. people have no respect for anything anymore and that shows with the amount of plagiarism that's been going on on FP. i'm glad you're continuing your other series because i really enjoy your work. again, i'm sorry this happened to you and it's damn shame.
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