Yes I am happy now that was a horrible thing to do. I would be pissed too. Thank you. :)

It isn't that I don't like Chloe but I think that she should have fought more and don't say that she did. What she did was runaway which isn't the same I really wished she had fought more he is too cocky and she is to forgetting forgiving and refuses to think of consequences with her family. I mean shouldn't she miss them more? It just frustrates me to no end when a character usually girl loses sense and goes for the guy no matter what he did so easily. I like it when they put up more of a fight. Excuse the rant just had to say it. Forgive me? Sorry. :)

Don't think junt because i'm writing here i ike your stories
the first one i liked , but then you made 2 more , exactly the same, you're not original , and your stupid excuse of plagiarism isn't going to make us buy your stupid stories , everyone knows you're the author and i haven't seen your stories in another sites , even if it was like that i'm sure you're beind it,
but well
don't think you have us on the edge waiting .

Words cannot describe how unbelievably pissed I am at you right now. You could have at least given us a warning that this story was UNFINISHED. There is no way in hell I am paying to finish a fanfiction. What a way to scam people though. Put up some of it, leave off of a cliffhanger, and then demand money for the rest. I feel bad for all the people you've managed to rip off. The story isn't very original anyway. I've read a dozen stories on here with the exact same theme.

she really is stubborn :p

ooo suspence is in the air...

Brilliant a bit unsure about how chloe will take ryans appearance though...

Completely hooking cant wait to find out what the end result is between chloe and ryan :)

Wow, really?
I understand that the whole plagiarism thing would make you angry but I still don't think it's fair and very kind of you to leave your story up here and unfinished WITHOUT warning people before they start that it is unfinished. I don't like to read unfinished stories and that's why I picked this: it came up as completed. I think you should add a warning in the summary like most other plagiarised authors do saying, discontinued on FP due to plagiarism. I loved your story...I just think it was selfish of you not to say anythig for new readers...

Is that the end?

I really like this story. So I'm going to look for your ebook on nook, or wherever my phone will let me get it, to finish. :-)

Really bummed that I can't finish reading any of the series :/

Really bummed that I can't finish reading any of the series :/

I can't believe I didn't get the code in time TT TT

please put up another code? I doubt my mom will let me buy stuff online. Curse the bitch that copied your work and get you off fiction press. You are an awesome writer, and im going to keep you on alert so if you post another code, I'd totally get it this time

Good luck in your writing career!

-OliviaS4 over and out

Chloe has become exceedingly annoying for some reason. She's so slow to grasp that maybe her family are the bad guys. I get that it's a realistic reaction, but it's like the seriousness of the situation has to be spoon fed to her.