Reviews for Forget to Stay Asleep
Harmful Love chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Awesome. Thanks for reviewing my songs! Keep on writing!
John Rolfe chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
another good song that I can unfortunetly relate to:(
PiggyBunny chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Very well done! There is really nothing more to say, it's just very, very well done!
Anna Christie chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Hmm. I was a bit confused at first as to whether this was supposed to be about a lover or just a friend. I think it's just a friend, right? Or am I still confused. haha It's still a nice piece though, but you might work on clarifying the meaning a bit? Just my meager suggestion, keep writing!
Elea Zeno chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
I would like to first thank you for your review. This has a strong cadence and a sort of simple message, but it gets a bit muddled it took me a moment to realize it was two friends more drifted apart but that might just be because lyrics are meant to be heard not read.