Reviews for A Torment Unresolved
KelaBelle chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
Clever poem you have created here. Everything flows and makes sense, brillaint.

My favourite line was The pen comes down,

The words are written,

Because that's what you do for homework, which is descrbing whats happening.

Nice poem.
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Haha! What an amusing conclusion. You had me completely wrapped into the idea of the "evil torturer". Oh, and I love that your repeated the sound of the clock ticking. That was very well done. Great wording and pace.
scripted chapter 2 . 10/6/2009
Yep - you captured the evilness of homework pretty perfectly.

Oh how we all want to kill it so...

Once again, beautiful work. Don't know how you manage to personify everything - but it's a brilliant talent.

Never give up on it! D

-scripted
scripted chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Hehehe. Love this!

My reactions before the last stanza just show how good it is... All my mind was doing was going '..ew...' wondering all the forms of such torture that this could be.

But then the last stanza came and realisation dawned. Loved the ending xP

Brilliant poem as always!

-scripted