|Reviews for I'm Leaving|
| Lady Eleanor Boleyn chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Well, I wouldn't really see it as a poem. It's more a note or a stream of conciousness, but it's still good!
| chewychester chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
You were trying for a love-related poem? I really like it, love thyself! Then throw the rest out with the trash.
| itm426 chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Interesting, but you can definately include an undercurrent of love in your storys!
| xXhootsXx chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Oh my gosh! THAT WAS AMAZING! It showed emotion, it showed sadness...I actually had tears in my eyes at the end of this! Wow...that was beautiful! Good job!
| dissapear chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
that was good! But i think u should just stick to what your GREAT at
| SLMC chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
no offense, i just didn't love it. it doesn't fit your personality and i think to be a great writer you have to write about something you want to write about and that you were inspired to write about, not something your friend tells you to write.
| Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
I really liked this. I liked the line: "You may have had me yesterday, but today, I’m free." It was really good. It just snatched my attention.
| TheHeavenlyTears chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Wow this was intense and believable!
I love how you wrote this. So much passion...
Keep writing, you are amazing!
| awake and dreaming chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
I really liked this. I like how you wrote "life isn't a game of dress-up" and then you related that to Barbie and Ken. That was clever. :) I also love how the three lines that started with "this face," "these hands," and "these arms." They all connected and tied-in. Good job. And I'm glad you wrote a love-related poem. :)