Reviews for Train Rides
habsfan chapter 1 . 2/11/2016
Aww that was beautiful and very well written ;) Short and sweet. Almost made me emotional...
somersaultkick chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
I cried at the end and I was so happy. Awghhhh you can save a person with your love!
Belly boo1099 chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Cute!
AmericanPeanut chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Aww! This is absolutely adorable. And sad at times. But mainly adorable :) Very well written, for something written quickly.
Umalpas chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
This is so cute! Aww, it's so sweet! :3 Love it! :D

Sincerely,
Miss Blue
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
One of the best stories ever!
DarkRadiance chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
This story was really really great! In under 2000 words you made me fall in love with your characters and their story. By the end I was tearing up! You are incredibly good to be able to convey so much emotion in so few words. This story reminded me of the people I see on the train some days, looking saddened and worse for wear. But I don't help them, nobody really does. So it was really nice to read about someone who cared enough to notice and to do something about it. Hopefully one day I can do the same.
I hope one day you write a full story, you definitely have the talent :)
Umsanalocality chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Damn I cried.
Somewhere Else chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Good day! I love your story. It makes me think that love truly exist in fiction. But all in all, I love it. Keep on writing and inspiring people. More power. :)
Mintyowls chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
This is a really sweet short story, it's kind of believable as well which I quite enjoyed :3 I am sort of a sucker for a cute ending every now and again though ;D All in all a very snazzy story, thanks for writing it ;3
Baila chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Excellent read :) Even though you've compared the guy's eyes to very commonly used things (the ocean and the sky), you've done it in a way that is different from the rest, that doesn't make it sound cliched and too overused. For example, I loved the sentence at the beginning; "They are the strongest color of blue, like the sea, but are washed away by a pain and hopelessness as if someone reached into his head and turned a knob that dimmed the lights.". It's a beautiful sentence and shows your talent as a writer. I hope you will write longer short stories, instead of oneshots. I am looking forward to hearing more from you.
Keep writing and all the best :D x x
n7shoujo chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
That... oh my God... I nearly cried at the end. Actually, while writing this I think I'm about to. Wow. This is really inspiring. It is. It really is. What can I say but thank you for writing? Wow. Thank you.
turtles-eat-rice chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
This is the most adorable story ever. I'm smiling stupidly at my computer screen because of you. Thanks...
Great work!xx
heal me forever chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
bbeautifully written wiping d happy tears ...each word nd sentence brought d emotions out of me really pretty good one :)
twibbit chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
:))
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