Whose doll that was?

Aww that was beautiful and very well written ;) Short and sweet. Almost made me emotional...

I cried at the end and I was so happy. Awghhhh you can save a person with your love!

Cute!

Aww! This is absolutely adorable. And sad at times. But mainly adorable :) Very well written, for something written quickly.

This is so cute! Aww, it's so sweet! :3 Love it! :D

Sincerely,
Miss Blue

One of the best stories ever!

This story was really really great! In under 2000 words you made me fall in love with your characters and their story. By the end I was tearing up! You are incredibly good to be able to convey so much emotion in so few words. This story reminded me of the people I see on the train some days, looking saddened and worse for wear. But I don't help them, nobody really does. So it was really nice to read about someone who cared enough to notice and to do something about it. Hopefully one day I can do the same.
I hope one day you write a full story, you definitely have the talent :)

Damn I cried.

Good day! I love your story. It makes me think that love truly exist in fiction. But all in all, I love it. Keep on writing and inspiring people. More power. :)

This is a really sweet short story, it's kind of believable as well which I quite enjoyed :3 I am sort of a sucker for a cute ending every now and again though ;D All in all a very snazzy story, thanks for writing it ;3

Excellent read :) Even though you've compared the guy's eyes to very commonly used things (the ocean and the sky), you've done it in a way that is different from the rest, that doesn't make it sound cliched and too overused. For example, I loved the sentence at the beginning; "They are the strongest color of blue, like the sea, but are washed away by a pain and hopelessness as if someone reached into his head and turned a knob that dimmed the lights.". It's a beautiful sentence and shows your talent as a writer. I hope you will write longer short stories, instead of oneshots. I am looking forward to hearing more from you.
Keep writing and all the best :D x x

That... oh my God... I nearly cried at the end. Actually, while writing this I think I'm about to. Wow. This is really inspiring. It is. It really is. What can I say but thank you for writing? Wow. Thank you.

This is the most adorable story ever. I'm smiling stupidly at my computer screen because of you. Thanks...
Great work!xx

bbeautifully written wiping d happy tears ...each word nd sentence brought d emotions out of me really pretty good one :)