Reviews for Train Rides |
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![]() ![]() Whose doll that was? |
![]() ![]() Aww that was beautiful and very well written ;) Short and sweet. Almost made me emotional... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cried at the end and I was so happy. Awghhhh you can save a person with your love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! This is absolutely adorable. And sad at times. But mainly adorable :) Very well written, for something written quickly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cute! Aww, it's so sweet! :3 Love it! :D Sincerely, Miss Blue |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the best stories ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was really really great! In under 2000 words you made me fall in love with your characters and their story. By the end I was tearing up! You are incredibly good to be able to convey so much emotion in so few words. This story reminded me of the people I see on the train some days, looking saddened and worse for wear. But I don't help them, nobody really does. So it was really nice to read about someone who cared enough to notice and to do something about it. Hopefully one day I can do the same. I hope one day you write a full story, you definitely have the talent :) |
![]() ![]() Damn I cried. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good day! I love your story. It makes me think that love truly exist in fiction. But all in all, I love it. Keep on writing and inspiring people. More power. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really sweet short story, it's kind of believable as well which I quite enjoyed :3 I am sort of a sucker for a cute ending every now and again though ;D All in all a very snazzy story, thanks for writing it ;3 |
![]() ![]() Excellent read :) Even though you've compared the guy's eyes to very commonly used things (the ocean and the sky), you've done it in a way that is different from the rest, that doesn't make it sound cliched and too overused. For example, I loved the sentence at the beginning; "They are the strongest color of blue, like the sea, but are washed away by a pain and hopelessness as if someone reached into his head and turned a knob that dimmed the lights.". It's a beautiful sentence and shows your talent as a writer. I hope you will write longer short stories, instead of oneshots. I am looking forward to hearing more from you. Keep writing and all the best :D x x |
![]() ![]() ![]() That... oh my God... I nearly cried at the end. Actually, while writing this I think I'm about to. Wow. This is really inspiring. It is. It really is. What can I say but thank you for writing? Wow. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the most adorable story ever. I'm smiling stupidly at my computer screen because of you. Thanks... Great work!xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() bbeautifully written wiping d happy tears ...each word nd sentence brought d emotions out of me really pretty good one :) |