Reviews for Train Rides
Hiwiwy chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Sweet, short, fantastic. I absolutely love this.
ithinkyourgay chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
great story!
Artume chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Oh my goodness, I absolutely LOVED this! Loved it, Loved it, LOVED it! You totally deserve the nomination, good luck! Man, you are a very talented writer! :)
Icyfire4w5 chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
1) Ok, when I first clicked on this story, I thought, "If it's too long, then I'll read some other stories." Fortunately, its length is simply perfect.

2) I think that "dance like grass" is such a nice simile, yeah. :)

3) The ending touches my heart. I've expected a tragic ending, but I'm really happy that a simple act of kindness can redeem a lost soul.
FeatherfooD chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Seriously, in tears of joy and love for this story right now. (I can't believe I'm actually crying because of how sweet this story is) I will be shocked if you don't win the SKoW award for this one :)
morphine and lollipops chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Wow. Wow. Wowowow. Blown awaawy. :D

I love your style of writing.
lilaclia chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
This was short and sweet. Which is why it meant something when she made such an impact in his life in such a little time. I like the way you wrote this, it made the story better. It was sweet and cute, and you did a good job with the idea. :)
vicson chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
I adore this!

It's a really touching story, and I hope that there are people out there like your character. People who are are willing to give someone a proper look when everyone else simply looks the other way.

Beautiful!

-Vicson
eternallily chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Your one-shot was absolutely adorable! I loved it. Normally, I don't like to read one shots too much, because I love description and detail, and a lot of times when people write one-shots, they don't bother with either of those things. I liked your surprise ending. :)

~eternallily
Ella chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
This is beautiful. That's the only way I can describe it.
B-Dooliie chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
amazing, so wonderfull and beautiful and awesome.
BethyT chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Wow, I love this! It's so original; it gave me chills. But, above all, it was extremely cute. I liked it a lot.
Rubber Hazard chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
No offense, but the way that you set things up made it really hard to read. But it was a pretty good read, though. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Wow...this is really beautiful. I love it. So heartewarming and umlifting :D

Wow. I'm speechless with awe :)
lovecansmile chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
This story is absolutely adorable.I loved reading it. D Sometimes the best short stories come from the spur of the moment ideas.
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