Reviews for Broken Telephone |
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![]() ![]() Damn this was so promising but this some white folk shit... Here’s the ending for everyone she ruined the damn wedding. The end. |
![]() ![]() Omg! I eyed moreeee. |
![]() ![]() Please please update. I’ve loved this story and I can’t wait to see how it ends! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I keep coming back to this story hoping there's an update. Wish you are doing fine.. |
![]() ![]() I think every year I come back and check if you've returned! I hope you're still writing and I hope you come back to fiction press or better yet I hope you've got some of your work published! I'll be back next year begging you to come back! (but hopefully you return before that!) Hope you're well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Penny as always your stories are fantastically awesome, you really have a way with word and you manage to capture both mine and a lot of others full attention. However i would just like to mention a heads up about a mistake you unfortunately keep repeating. Beware of the words "Your" and "You're" because unfortunately you tend to use especially "You're" in a sentence that should say "Your" Fx. "You're head" should be "Your" Anyway i just wanted to quickly mention it because otherwise than that your stories are completely captivating and i really wish you would write more, i feel like i am so many years late to finally having discovered your stories because i have been looking after a needle in a haystack after good stories on this site and then finally i happen to stumble upon yours, merely by thinking about trying the romance section But thank you for your amazing stories, and i really really hope you someday would consider finishing "Broken Telefone" cause this is amazing. I have no idea where your amazing idea come from but i wish i knew Anyway, thank you very much for making my day brighter, i've also already finished two others of your stories. SWTE and its sequel of course, loved them so much gotta say |
![]() ![]() One more? Really? You said it yourself, right. Pleeeeaase? It's even a short one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT NOOOOOOO! I WANT THE LAST CHAPTER! O.O |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy shit, I just really need that last chapter. I love how each character is so distinctly themselves. I feel that if I were to just be given a dialogue quote, I'd ve able to immediately tell who said it because you wrote them with such style. It's a shame you haven't updated in years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh, I just reread this after a year or so and I have to say I really love it. The relationships between all the characters are so realistic and amusing. I do find it odd how it never came up between Ben and Sarah that Ben had a twin, though. I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! been waiting for this! Oh no! When will you continue this? Oh please do! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really something special :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() shit! nw u've gone and ruined sarah's wedding. too much drama...bt i'm hooked anyway,curious abt wat's going to happen soon ok? |