|Reviews for Broken Telephone|
| Jade chapter 1 . 9/4/2016
I think every year I come back and check if you've returned! I hope you're still writing and I hope you come back to fiction press or better yet I hope you've got some of your work published! I'll be back next year begging you to come back! (but hopefully you return before that!)
Hope you're well!
| JellaBells76 chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Hey Penny as always your stories are fantastically awesome, you really have a way with word and you manage to capture both mine and a lot of others full attention. However i would just like to mention a heads up about a mistake you unfortunately keep repeating.
Beware of the words "Your" and "You're" because unfortunately you tend to use especially "You're" in a sentence that should say "Your"
Fx. "You're head" should be "Your"
Anyway i just wanted to quickly mention it because otherwise than that your stories are completely captivating and i really wish you would write more, i feel like i am so many years late to finally having discovered your stories because i have been looking after a needle in a haystack after good stories on this site and then finally i happen to stumble upon yours, merely by thinking about trying the romance section
But thank you for your amazing stories, and i really really hope you someday would consider finishing "Broken Telefone" cause this is amazing. I have no idea where your amazing idea come from but i wish i knew
Anyway, thank you very much for making my day brighter, i've also already finished two others of your stories. SWTE and its sequel of course, loved them so much gotta say
| Reader chapter 8 . 9/5/2015
One more? Really? You said it yourself, right.
Pleeeeaase? It's even a short one!
| Damnjpg chapter 8 . 6/19/2015
WHAT NOOOOOOO! I WANT THE LAST CHAPTER! O.O
| svenn chapter 8 . 6/2/2015
holy shit, I just really need that last chapter. I love how each character is so distinctly themselves. I feel that if I were to just be given a dialogue quote, I'd ve able to immediately tell who said it because you wrote them with such style. It's a shame you haven't updated in years.
| Pseudonym59 chapter 8 . 9/14/2014
Ahh, I just reread this after a year or so and I have to say I really love it. The relationships between all the characters are so realistic and amusing. I do find it odd how it never came up between Ben and Sarah that Ben had a twin, though. I hope you update soon!
| bubublacz chapter 8 . 8/4/2014
Yes! been waiting for this! Oh no! When will you continue this? Oh please do!
| bubublacz chapter 4 . 8/4/2014
This is really something special :D
| bubublacz chapter 2 . 8/4/2014
| bubublacz chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
I love it :D
| genuisgina chapter 8 . 9/23/2013
shit! nw u've gone and ruined sarah's wedding. too much drama...bt i'm hooked anyway,curious abt wat's going to happen soon ok?
| genuisgina chapter 7 . 9/23/2013
like they shld jst criously get over all this confusion,it's making me anxious and making me itch.
| Miss Messi chapter 8 . 9/6/2013
Ahahaha Jemmy is brilliant n solo Lololol pls where is the rest of this story?! Eeehn! xox
| Fanatic Numero 1 chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
You are such a brilliant and fantastic author... I didn't expect to find you, but I did. Which now makes this 3 serious stories that I am following. XD
| Twisted Cat chapter 8 . 5/14/2013
Will you add to this already!