Reviews for Broken Telephone |
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PJC Macall chapter 7 . 7/30/2010 LOVE IT! please please update soon! |
luzanima chapter 7 . 7/25/2010 Gah! I am dying for Liv to finally realize who's who! My hope is that it'll be next chapter. I thought for sure during the rehearsal, but both bride and groom managed to flake out :) They can't get by with doing that at the wedding though! |
dumpyfledgling chapter 7 . 7/9/2010 I'm usually a silent reader but I have to tell you how excited I am that you updated. I loved the first few chapters and I checked FP religiously hoping you would update it. I stopped for a while and now when I do come back I see a new chapter. I don't want to force the creative process but I really hope you update soon. |
Night-Rayne chapter 7 . 7/8/2010 I really like this story though I do find it weird that she hasn't noticed anything, after she still hasn't "met" Solo so you'd think she'd consider other options... |
anon chapter 7 . 7/7/2010 NO! The suspense! The DRAMA! Please update. :) |
Twisted Cat chapter 7 . 7/2/2010 Oh lord! What are you doing? You cannot leave it at a cliff hanger like that! My head is going to explode with all the posibilities I'm trying to come up with. So, if you couldn't tell, I loved it. A couple spelling and grammar errors, but they pale against the whole magnitude of this uhh...book? I'm not sure what to call these. Just, wow. Good job. Keep it up :P |
ricebear chapter 7 . 7/2/2010 BRILLIANT STORY! I LOVE IT. i was literally screaming at my laptop saying "it's not ben, it's solo!" you're a great writer! keep it up. |
courtesylaughs chapter 7 . 7/1/2010 Oh, wow. I'm loving this story! Well, I'm really frustrated that Olivia doesn't know that Ben has a twin, but that's a given. Keep up the good work! |
CoverGirlInLove chapter 7 . 6/30/2010 Oh my, what a twist you’ve delivered! Finally they kiss! I’m so happy that you’ve updated. I’ve been wondering for sometime whether you’d be updating at all. For an unedited version, it wasn’t too bad I must say, a few extra commas wouldn’t have gone astray, but hey, I love this story and the twists you deliver, so I stop noticing. I’ll hold you to that pinky swear by the way. Please don’t take another five months :) CGIL xx |
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 7 . 6/29/2010 I MISSED YOU! I thought you died or something awful happened! The chapter was amazing...BUT what a cock tease! I mean really are you trying to kill me? PLEASE PLEASE update soon! Have a great week! -ifly*hugs* |
Bluecoco100 chapter 5 . 6/27/2010 wow, crazy chapter, love it so far |
Bluecoco100 chapter 3 . 6/27/2010 i really like this story. the plot is interesting, something i haven't read or seen before. keep up! :) |
Red Warden chapter 7 . 6/24/2010 Poor Solo, he reminds me of a sad little puppy at the end of this chapter. I just know the sexual tension will explode when she eventually figures out that he's not her sister's fiancee. Lets just hope its not in the middle of the ceremony. And Shannon she can't be up to any good. |
Sorraya T chapter 7 . 6/24/2010 love this! please update soon! :) |
Genato chapter 7 . 6/23/2010 OMG. I CAN'T WAIT. Please update. I love how you write their romance so frustrating-ly and agonizingly. :)) |