|Reviews for Broken Telephone|
| Trench Coats Suck chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
wow a new story
i really really want you too write midnight melody, what's it about? like is it a romance or what
i am loving this story it is amazing!
as usual and the charACTERS are funny and witty too obviously there sister and brother are going too be marrying each other and i can't wait till they meet
anyway great story update asap
| Nyte Tym Starr chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
this story seriously has to keep going. i would like to know what happens. i love the gay best friend!
| songforsummer chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Of course I want to review! :) lol Awesome as usual. I love how she doesn't just have a gay best friend, but a gay best friend awkward moment with him! Way to give them fun personalities.. I kind of feel like I know where this is going.. but knowing you there'll be a crazy twist I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter!... As long as Rabbit Hole gets updated too!
| xInkMusique chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
I want more :D Jemmy seems fun
| chng234 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
this is a nice story. i got a feeling that their siblings r marrying each other. but this is jus my guess. update soon
| Sorrow's Smile chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
So cliche and predictable. but that just makes it more amazing.
| WritingWithChocolate chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
:D I have now subscribed to you as an author...because honey, you have serious skills with words. I love this so far (gay friend
| anamika chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Its hilarious but kinda choppy or maybe its my lack of sleep... I like these guys, they're adequately insane and i love that you dropped us into the story then actually doing the whole getting to know each other bit...This story should be fun, tho you better not slack off on the rabbit hole! Will wait anxiously for the next chapter.
| TwoClovedHooves chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
OMIGOD I haven't been so convinced of a thing's awesomeness since I found MLIA.
He was a little creepy at times. But most writers were anyway. It came with the lifestyle.
Heart the above to the MAX!
Your writing is snappy, clear, and terribly, terribly witty. Excuse me while I run and read the rest of your stuff instead of cleaning my room :)
| Rose-Red-1990 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
I love this already! It reminds me slightly of rough petals which is one of my all time favourite fps :)
Looking forward to the update
| breethewriter chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
I like this. I think it's cute and funny and full of great "oh, that didn't just happen, did it?" moments. So far I love all the characters, especially Jemmy. Nice start :)
| midnitefaeri chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Aw this has to be one of the cutest story plot idea thing ever! I can't wait to read more.
| CrossMyHeart chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Oh my Goodness! Keep Writing!
I thought it was a one-shot, but then i got to the end and i was like;
Out loud. Really.
It was too good to end there.
| Has A WaywithWords chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT. Just letting you know, this story made my continusly sucky day into a brilliantly happy one! So, thanks for that. Update soon!
| Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
This reminds me of MLIA so much it's not even funny. I love it. Update soon please!