Your story is even more confusing than my brain. I love it. i dont really have much else to say

Hey, just read your first chapter and i'm intrigued. :D

Here's some points though, that you could apply to your writing. You like to use numerical form within the story - personally, i would write out 'four' rather than type 4, it just makes it a little disjointed (it's a personal feeling of mine). Also, couple of spelling errors, 'th preverbal Ice Queen' is incorrect.

Great style though and i like that it's spaced out well. Some writers are reluctant to properly space and paragraph and it's a chore for the reader to try and read it.

Great use of italics and elipses to highlight tension etc. Good Job, it will be interesting to see where this is going and what their connection is.