Hahaha! Oh, this was great. I think you did a lovely job. Hope to read more from you soon!

That was a good story. I giggled at many parts.

BUahahhahahaha!

Cough. That was kind of awesome. I love Finn. And nameless baby badass/hilarious asshole chick narrator. I love lamp. 3 :D

*clears throat* If this story was a person I would get naked and make love to it.
Seriously.
I'm not even kidding.
-Clarie

I was laughing for this whole story - just the swear words (not the swear words themselves, but the way they were used) was just HILARIOUS! And Finn and Frankie are such an adorable couple, but it took me a while to figure out that the narrator was Finn's sister (I thought it was his best friend or something). Just Finn was really funny, how he vehemently denied for about 3/4 of the story that he was gay, and then "That's my sister, and my boyfriend." :D Oh, gosh, I just loved this so much!

that was super cute and quirky. Like an indie film in story form.

It's beautiful.

Magically, gay-fully, beautiful.

Oh gosh, this is frikkin hilarious. Made me very happy. Very good story, good concept/writing, a few spelling errors, but pfft. My one concern was that it wasn't obvious who was telling the story until the fight. Or maybe I missed something. Shit, I think I'm still missing something. I don't really understand their relation. Anyways, I've explained the beauty of this.

Luck with life stuff.

~ibbit:]

Probably the most fantastic manlove one-shot ever. Just sayin'. Also, telling it from his sister's point of view was such a welcome change of pace from all of the romances told from the romancee's perspective.

OMG LOL that is the funniest Thing I've read in too long. Comedic genius. My brother kept asking me what I was sniggering at.

I love how Finn is. And that they stalked punk boy. And that they have two alcoholic mothers. And that punk boy got pissed with their alcoholic mothers and started singing the Beatles. Idk, it was just genius.

This was so incredibly fucking adorable, and I'm not even remotely into slash.

Go Finn/Frankie!

lol, this was AWESOME xD

AHHHHHHHHH OMG SO GOOOOD.

I haven't read anything this startlingly original on FictionPress in ages! from your point-of-view, to your crazy characters, to your off-beat humor, this story is filled with the eccentric and the delightful! i loved it! it made me laugh and coo 'awww' and then laugh some more! FictionPress needs more fresh, fun, amazing writers like you!

INSTANT FAVORITE ROAR.

-zozo

that was awesome!

absoloutely adorable, and i know this sounds cheesy, but kind of inspirational. A friend of my sisters came out but he literally waited until the day after he graduated because it was just easier than putting up with all the homophobes in highschool. Its brilliantly written and I absoloutely love that we got to see a sweeter side of Finn. BTW why are the two family's living together? because she called the dad's 'my dad's' how can both the mums and both the dads be her parents?