haha, that was hilarious! and quite sweet.

i love their family.

well done and cheers ;)

med

OMG what a great story! Love Finn and Frankie is adorable. Wish we got the narrator's name, though!

I truly, truly enjoyed this. I laughed so hard, the humor was grand. and the cuteness, hng~

magical

fucking awesome

Oh seriously, this was brilliant. So well written, developed and witty I thoroghly enjoyed it!

one word: LOL

Pure and utter fun and joy! Bravo! :)

Your characters are just magical! Such creative writing is always fantastic to read, I just grinned through the whole story! A

Daw, I loved this. You create such unique characters and situations. And of course, breaking the jock stereotype is always good for me :)

omg, more! MORE! You need to write more slash! Aah! I just read this one and Above the Influence, and I love them! Best reads of the year!

I realize I'm bombarding you with reviews, but this is sheer delight. AH.

You mnetioned tim hortons and now I really want something from there but I'm really really broke! Your so MEAN! I

There aren't enough slash one-shots on this site, this was fantastic. I love Finn and his anger, he was quite developed for a character in a one shot.

-nell

oh my i love this! i've always thought the narrator was a dude that finn might fall for (Best friends and all.. at least thats wat it sounded like) until i discovered he was a SHE and she was his SISTER!

and i think i just realized that they are all half brothers half sisters? they have two moms and two dads? or wat? maybe i'm delusional but damn the life of the 4 parents 4 kids sounds like a chill life hahaha!