Reviews for Mr Green Shirt |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahhahaha i wish my horoscope would come true lolz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha ha this is good. I liked it. That was a pretty fabulous pick up line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, That was a really clever way of putting all of the prompts into the challenge! :D The actual plotline was really good :) One mistake; I caste my eyes towards the stage. There isn't an 'e' on the end of cast :) Great work with this, I really loved it! :D ranDUMM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...Lizzie, Jane, Darcy...now where have I heard that before? Haha but anyways it was short but cute. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was such a cute short. awesome job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! If only a dude would use THAT pick up line on me! Very good story. I loved the horoscope thing, and I totally believe in them, but not super religiously. :) Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this was cute :) Horoscopes *sigh*. Aren't exactly real, but I find them hilarious to read XD I love how you managed to put that in here! And Darcy sounds amazing. I love the pick-up line he used with the phone! Never heard that one :) Anyway, awesome job. |