|Reviews for Damnation of an Afro|
| Agent.Frappuccino chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
I really don't know what to say about this story lol! I was a little hesitant to read it because I thought it had to deal with racism, and I don't like racism lol. Overall, i thought the language was good and the dialogue was funny. Keep writing!
| Raingypsy chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Hey asn! Great job. I really liked it!
| ranDUMM chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
HAHAHAHAHAHA, it was really sad at the beginning, got a bit happier in the middle, and the end was HYE-larious! :D Really well done :) One mistake: You are so annoying you know that?”
“Of course I did.
There, the tense changes. It should have been "You are so annoying you know that?" "Of course I DO." :) It also drags a tiny bit at the beginning, but the middle and end MORE than make up for it! Other than that, great work! :D:D