Reviews for still a part of me
gg. lass chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
this is beautiful.

i can almost feel the pull towards him as i'm reading.

great job!

yours until the wind changes,

a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
you capture the emotions of love and longing exactly. there are many great lines, including the ending. "the shutters of my insecurities" is a perfect line, and it rings so true. great work.
for shame chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
i love everything you write. honestly.

you inspired me to break away from traditional poetry.


this is a beautiful piece; i'm glad to see you posting more poetry.

"i miss you as wide/as the flat prairie skies" is beautiful. i've never been to a prairie, but i've been to sand dunes, and i just imagine how wide and empty and large they seemed.

i love the idea of insecurity being like shutters.

your diction is perfect.