|Reviews for still a part of me|
| gg. lass chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
this is beautiful.
i can almost feel the pull towards him as i'm reading.
yours until the wind changes,
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
you capture the emotions of love and longing exactly. there are many great lines, including the ending. "the shutters of my insecurities" is a perfect line, and it rings so true. great work.
| for shame chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
i love everything you write. honestly.
you inspired me to break away from traditional poetry.
this is a beautiful piece; i'm glad to see you posting more poetry.
"i miss you as wide/as the flat prairie skies" is beautiful. i've never been to a prairie, but i've been to sand dunes, and i just imagine how wide and empty and large they seemed.
i love the idea of insecurity being like shutters.
your diction is perfect.