Really good! I enjoyed the story immensely. I really like werewolves, Lycans and other animal cross human mix-breed stories, so thank you for writing this one! There's only one thing I feel you could work on, and that's to punctuate more In you sentences, or merely add more breakers, (however, although, and, but etc.) just to make what the characters say flow a bit more. Other than the few discrepancies I picked up about punctuation, it has a good plot (from what I've read) and the mystery of the new kid, Caspian, in house Voltain, is quite puzzling, in a good way, and makes you guess. I hope that with this review you would have reached twenty, so that I and others can continue to devour you well-written story. Best wishes for writing, and hope to see more chapters soon!

I love this story please continue . Its awesome I can't stop reading.

Good job! I love your characters; they are interesting without being overly "special" in some way. Keep up the good work!

Sweet! I wanted to see Nikoli fight, just to see how good he really is as he seems to think. Hey, thats not that long of a wait, just what, 4 days right?

# 12! 8 More! This reminds me of Harry Potter but so much better becuase it's about Werewolves! I loves it!

great chapter and lol to Caspian can't wait to see if he's gonna be annoying :D UPDATE SOON

I am reviewing with love. I give you props i love the story so far. I love all the twist and turns of the story. Keep up the good work. By the way i am a sucker i'll review all chapters.

It's sounds really good so far. Though a little familiar but familiar isn't always a bad thing. Good job. I can hardly keep up with your writing speed. I loved the whole speech about the lycans. It was very domante i can't wait to read more.

This is awsome please update soon I can't wait to read more :D

Hey there! I just wanted to say that this story is awesome! You're a really great writer, good at imagination, and absolutely good with description. Post the next part ASAP! I'll be waiting to read it!

really good

hope you upload soon

This is a GREAT beginning :). I have such a soft spot for werewolves, and I absolutely loved the descriptions in your prologue.

There were a few grammar issues, and I agree with the other reviewer, that when a character addresses the reader, it breaks the flow and takes me out of the story. There are smoother ways to introduce your ideas.

Overall, it's very good - I can't wait for the next chapter!

- B.

Interesting take on a werewolf's transformation, and nicely written. Good so far.

I love the voice you write in. And I like that you didn't make their weakness silver and changed up the transformation.

The only thing I didn't really care for was when Mikael addressed the readers. Like this:

"You’re probably wondering what in the hell all these people are doing in my house."

It might just be me and my personal preference, but I don't want the characters to speak directly to me.

But besides that, I found this to be a very enjoyable read! I wonder if he will end up getting close to a mortal.

Wow.

Very, very nice prologue! I'm typically more of a vampire fan, but this has already managed to keep my attention.