|Reviews for Michael|
| rainpaint chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Hey! I recognize you! (I am reading PE over again because fanfiction helps keep me sane...)
I don't think Gabriel and Michael seemed feminine. They did very boy-ish things (the wiping of the lipstick on the other brother's pants stuck out to me as particularly boyish).
Writing as a boy would be tricky - I've done it before, but I don't know with how much success. Since this story was written a year and a half ago and you've written several stories from Pevensie boys' perspectives, do you feel like you've gotten better at it?