|Reviews for A Decade of Disgust|
| rainpaint chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
"...nuclear carousel ride." This is my favorite description of a microwave. Actually, I don't know that I've ever read a description of a microwave...
To me, the beginning paragraphs didn't really fit. I get what you were trying to do, but...
I think you captured disgust here well. It comes across a little bit as anger, but the ending makes it more like disgust. What did your teacher think?
| 403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
I really like this story; great descriptions and characters. The beginning was great because it started with something familiar and original. The voice of your character is likable and makes me want to know more about her. This seems like it's part of a bigger story; it would be interesting to see what led to these circumstances. I really like your overall writing style; great story.