love the last bit - it made me giggle lol

loving your other story - family lies - as well

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I love this "Glide like Ghosts" story, it makes you see so many things, that may not be necessary for the reader, but sure as hell are lovely to read.

Little Viola is adorable. Teenager Viola, is quite nice too, it's really good, that we get to see it for ourselves, even if you did a good job describing it on Family Lies.

I'm looking foward to reading more of this, and of the next story on the saga.

~MaGa.

They are a fragmented, definitely messed-up family... but I like each one of them. They complement each other very well.

Greetings!

Actually, Olivia is the one who is 18 in the second chapter.

Love the stories, but how does Viola go from 14 to 18 in less than a year?

"I will staple your eyelids open, gouge out your left eyeball with my pencil, and shove it down your throat"

Viola is so sweet!

And despite how annoying Sebastian can be, I still love his Big Brother attitude.

Glad you updated.

Gerard and Alicia are the only characters that I don’t like in your stories. Everything about them is obsession and cruelty!

Can you believe that it took me until near the end of this chapter to realize that this story is written in past tense instead of present? I hope it won’t get too confusing for you to be changing tenses between two stories that have so many similarities.

I haven’t said this before and I think this is a pretty good time to do it: forgive my abuse of the English language. As it isn’t my mother language, I don’t know it well enough to express myself, though I can read it without problems.

Greetings!

I haven't realized that the first two chapters were up! I’m going to read the other chapter right now, but I wanted to leave a review for each one.

How did Viola do that thing with Duke’s lungs? Or the air he was breathing? I thought that her only power before Family Lies was the ability to see ghosts…