Reviews for Roses and Thorns
xxredpiscesxx chapter 24 . 5/30/2011
great but the last chapter was a little upsetting...

okay so i have a few questions that i need to ask you:

does autumn real dies?

how does she die?

and i didn't get the last part where abel thinks something to himself...could you please tell me what it means?

and one more question...who's child is Kaitlyn carrying?is it Abel's or someone else's?

plz reply back as soon as possible...

keep up the good work

xxxxxxx
burlap chapter 24 . 5/23/2010
Alright, I loved the plot, and the change of perspective in certain chapters added to my impression on this read-the perspective change worked with this one. Your discriptive skills are also very impressive.

You changed tenses at certain points in the story, which was slightly confusing. I also spotted grammatical and punctuational errors, as well as a few awkward sentences throughout the whole story. There is also some spelling confusion on certain words (curse the English language!), and your characters seem to be majorly bi-polar at times. I've also noted that there is an excessive use of certain characters names within one sentence or paragraph. I got a slight 'Twilight' vibe from this for some reason.

I do have one, little question, though: Why is Chapter Fourteen entirely in bold?

Happy Writing-

Inauspicious Stars
Error 404 User not found chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
ill be your beta reader, that is, if you'll be mine... mine for demonology and eventuality. pm me for details.