This is a good story. It reminds me a little of a favorite book series of mine though she didn't fall that quickly into love with him. You need to look at the spelling though before you post. I understand what they're supposed to mean but it's a bit bothersome. Keep up the good work!

BP-BW

Ah! I love it! Just some grammar and typo errors but that's easily fixed! Hope you feel better!

HGS

thanks for the chapter! :D

aw~ how cute. :)

ehehe, he's so caring.

This story is amazing! I love it :D

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hello..i like this story but u are not updating...wats wrong

poor girl, i feel bad for her.

update soon.

I really like the story! please update soon!

HGS

Please update soon!

I loved this chapter and I love this story...cannot wait to read more, please update soon!

i liked it! some parts reminded me of that movie 'ever after' with drew barrymore.

her father is awful! she should have killed him in his sleep!

cant wait for more!

um...i saw some typos but i don't remember where they are. just look over it to check for proper word use. like in the last paragraph, it said "Annabell WERE too distracted" it should be WAS too distracted. No biggie just look it over. there were other mistakes like that. i really like your story and hope you update soon!

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God, I hate her father. But maybe it'll work out where she's going. :D :D Great story! I'm really ready to read more! Poor girl... that's sad. But it makes it good.

*sigh* I feel absolutely horrible for annabell! Her fathers an arse! Well maybe she'll have a better life with Lord Darshia! Cannot wait for the next chapter.

Love, love, love it! Really awesome!