Reviews for Cinderaida
AnonymousReads chapter 27 . 8/13/2013
That was the worst ending ever! I loved the story but why end it like that where there's still so many questions like if her uncle got caught? what happened with Isabella? Did luca end up standing up to his parents? Does he end up maryying Aida or at least with her? How bad is Aida injured? Is there a happily ever after? I did love it I just didn't love the ending. Great story. :)
HJaneMay chapter 16 . 1/11/2012
Billy Bob Joe Junior, The Third, Twice Removed...Ha! If we ever get another cat (we already have three) that will be his name.
HJaneMay chapter 14 . 1/10/2012
I love the Cinderella story and having it modernized is always fun for me to read.
Brightheart chapter 27 . 11/12/2011
i rly like the story. i just wish u could have elongated on the ball and the fiance picking. the ending could have been fluffier, but i understand ur sentiments.
Skyless16 chapter 27 . 10/25/2011
This has got to be one of the best books i've ever read! I LOOOOOOOOVED IT! THX and keep writing!
foreverthesickestchick chapter 16 . 8/7/2011
Dude! You totally stole my name! Well, it's Billy Bob Joe JOHN Junior the Third, but really! I made that! I think... oh well :P aida and luca are cute together :)
morexforxme chapter 5 . 8/2/2011
Bwahaha, right again!

Luca - is - such - a - butt!
morexforxme chapter 4 . 8/2/2011
Hahaha. Called it!

Another guess: the guy who almost hit Aida also happens to be Luca Giordano?
morexforxme chapter 2 . 8/2/2011
Ooh. I'm a-likin' dis already.

Let me guess, Luca Giordano ends up going to their school – right?
Pranali chapter 27 . 6/20/2011
I don't like the ending all that much. But the rest of the story is good.
bumbleB825 chapter 27 . 6/16/2011
It was a good over all story with a fluffy ending haha

Although a rewrite does sound exciting!
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 26 . 6/14/2011
Can't wait for the next one.

Hope you had a good year. ;)
Lorana chapter 25 . 8/12/2010
I really enjoyed what you've written so far in your story. But I did find it very annoying that you Aida's and Addi's names are so similar. While reading it is very easy to mix up until you talk about one bouncing around and it's safe to assume it's Addi. Honestly a different name for Addi would have been best. When Aida, Addi and Jace travel to Italy up to when she makes it to the ball you made it seem like Aida wasn't on crutches. Especially with her carrying bags, wrestling etc. Not sure if you have had the experience of using them, but from my own personal experience it is nearly impossible. (Oh and stairs are terrifying to go up and down. Plus takes forever to do so even with lots of practice.)
notyourbiz chapter 25 . 12/13/2009
hehe oh my gosh! How did I not see this happening? Luca doesn't only have to find Aida, he has to find her before she's dead! Oh my goodness update soon!
Jackie.Forever chapter 25 . 12/11/2009
Nice chapter! yay, Aida wore the dress I totally love! haha. And omg, that was a good ending. It surprised me to see the whole shoe left behind thing. Real cool, it's just like Cinderella! haha.

And yes Addi to the rescue! kinda, haha. I'm glad she figured it out. And omg, I hate isabelle. how old is she again? and luca is so cute.

Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter and how luca will find Aida.
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