Reviews for october rain
Isca chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
"deep breaths were drops on the roof

tapping gently in the silent room

opening lashes breaking away clouds

the sun shines in the color of your eyes."

This is my favourite part of the poem. The rain imagery is beautiful - creating a very stimulating auditory effect. The sunshine imagery is also very creative and heartfelt. :)
Lily-McEntire chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
I like the october rain side to it.