Reviews for Death Tick
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
i like this. not read the stephen king but would like to. i especially love the opening line, it sounds really...i dont know, i want to use the word dry but im not sure if thats the right word? the only line i didnt like was the end one - it was too emotional, the rest of it was kind of descriptive and unattached. but maybe the emotional ending is a good contrast? im not sure. anyway, im talking rubbish - this was a really good poem. nice work ]