Reviews for Mother and I
MeAsIAm chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
The summary is what made me look further.

I love poems, as I feel that sometimes they convey more than prose can. And I feel that this poem was the classic example. Repetition of the last line emphasized that the daughter and her mother are all alone. All the lines contribute towards the common overall image of the poem: wait for the father.

Imagery works quite well!
PeNnOtE chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
That was very sweet. I enjoyed it.
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Well done :) I like the repetition in this, it works well :)
Anna Christie chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Aw. So beautiful. And so very heart-felt. I love this.
Brittxo chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Wow! Such a bueatiful Poem! Wonderful
LeaveYourHardTimesBehind chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
beautiful poem. loved it.