|Reviews for Denial|
| letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Ooh, love how this turned into a reflective piece :)
| playing in gasoline chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Great poem. :)
By the end I felt frustration...and the internal absence of hope.
| Ai Miyazaki chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Oh, very nice! you really got me at the ending with the mirror (i love mirrors in written pieces!) flows very nicely, and i think it effectively shows a person who feels imperfect.
| Thunder Freedom chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Col. :-) I like the pattern you use of two short lines followed by another longer line, but there are a few lines that seem a bit long and maybe wordy:
The alliteration in "Just let the wall fall" is nice, but I think it's a bit long, and it strays from the two-word pattern from the previous lines in that space.
I like the word "Wheedling", but it also seems a bit long and I have no idea what it means.
I like it overall, though. Nice work! :-)