Reviews for if it could be different
shell chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
all of these are amazing, as usual. i love them.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
i like that you wove in the dialogue; it gave the piece a unique touch. like halfway between a poem and a story. the sensory details are evocative and help the poem sink in. poignant and relatable.