Reviews for The Schoolgirl
LemonScience13 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
I like this! :-) Thanks for sharing!
Dreams Are Bursting Bubbles chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Simple, and still catchy. Great.
Mirabella chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
I like the rhyming and simple imagery here. Nicely done. :)
existence chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
i really got a subtle but defined pic of the little girl in my mind.

and you used only so many words! - kudos. :D

it was nice to read this after skimming through so many of the other poems out there.

thanks for keeping simplicity tasteful and above all, true to its meaning.
CrazyFictionChallenges chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Lovely.

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