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| Thunder Freedom chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Really, really cool. :-) I'd say that "I" needs to be capitalized, but you actually use it very well as a poetic tactic. It adds to the tone of the poem, whether you intended it to or not, and I think you should keep it that way if other people point it out.
I like how you blurred "iwanttobespecial, iwanttobespecial"; it's very original and modern, and I like that.
Good work! :-) Keep writing!