|Reviews for An Abstract Taste|
| sealednectar chapter 30 . 2/1/2010
Having a baby is such a wonderful thing (so they say), but I can definitely understand why one would feel this way. Foetuses are somewhat parisitic in the way they feed off of the mother. Great haikus here. Reminded me of Aliens Vs Predators. :)
| sealednectar chapter 28 . 2/1/2010
Funny. Loved it. A stark contrast between civility/respect and hate. A perfect way to express anger.
| sealednectar chapter 12 . 2/1/2010
Hmm. This one made me stop and think. It's really interesting and so mysterious.
| sealednectar chapter 5 . 2/1/2010
Aw, cute! I love this one:) Love the image this haiku gives me.
| sealednectar chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
Fantastic. I liked the use of the senses here. Taste and feel. Onomatopoeia is wonderful too. Here,'ouch' made this very striking!
| sealednectar chapter 3 . 2/1/2010
Oh so sad! Everyone can relate to this probably. :(
| sealednectar chapter 2 . 2/1/2010
Ah, a great image! Good job.
| nickyO chapter 40 . 1/30/2010
Some very strong and hard emotions expressed effectively in the last two poems.
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo chapter 38 . 1/29/2010
love love love this collection. Every poem makes me think or takes me back to somtime in my life. I also love how you write, it's just enjoyable to read. amazing job overall :D
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo chapter 25 . 1/29/2010
So true in so many ways. Love it. my favorite part is:
no one ever said,
"go, see if she's really dead
or, is she lying?"
I am becoming a fan of ours.
Keep up the good work!
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo chapter 11 . 1/29/2010
This one says so much to me. Amazing work.
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo chapter 9 . 1/29/2010
I am a fan of people who can write good haikus, you happen to be one. I think this may be my favorite out of the bunch so far. Good job :D
| nickyO chapter 38 . 1/24/2010
this begs the question: if a lie is known to be transparent, by both speaker and reciever...is it a lie?
| nickyO chapter 37 . 1/7/2010
Ouch. My sister once said that the opposite of love isn't hate, but apathy...a lot of pain in this poem.
| nickyO chapter 19 . 1/7/2010
A good title at work with its poem