Reviews for Dollhouse
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Very well done. It's eerie, really, the thought of constantly being manipulated. Hopefully "they" don't play the games I played with my dolls. I don't see much need for editing in this poem. You seem to use line breaks and stanza breaks to your advantage. The flow is smooth and the punctuation dramatic. It seems to me that your poetry skills are quite advanced. Nice job.
walkmetoblivion chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
I like the idea of how you likened humanity to that of the plastic and lifeless dolls of a dollhouse. It has been an idea that I've always toyed with, too. Nice poetry style, but maybe you could try improving on a wider selection of descriptive words to improve the poem and show more imagery. (: