|Reviews for Standing in The Rain|
| Ink Kisses chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Beautiful poem, i love the way you hid silent tears in it
| lilmissAchi chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Oh i found it!
I mean, the bold letters..
SILENT TEARS (
anyway, u really love rhyming, eh?
What did u mean about NO WRATH?
I didn't quite get that...(oh dumb)
But ur last line has to be the best..
cuz NO ONE SEES YOUR TEARS...
| writerjamie chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
how peaceful. and so appropriate... the rain here just stopped a few minutes ago, as I was fighting my own internal battle. thanks.
| Ms.Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
The last stanza is the best. Nice work!