Reviews for Standing in The Rain
Ink Kisses chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Beautiful poem, i love the way you hid silent tears in it
lilmissAchi chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Oh i found it!

I mean, the bold letters..

SILENT TEARS (

anyway, u really love rhyming, eh?

What did u mean about NO WRATH?

I didn't quite get that...(oh dumb)

But ur last line has to be the best..

cuz NO ONE SEES YOUR TEARS...

very right
writerjamie chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
how peaceful. and so appropriate... the rain here just stopped a few minutes ago, as I was fighting my own internal battle. thanks.
Ms.Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
The last stanza is the best. Nice work!