|Reviews for I Revel In|
| LostInMe chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Fun, fun! A great poem to which many people can relate.
| walkmetoblivion chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Nice poem, and imagery. I like the words used, and the whole feel of the poem. Take note of certain grammatically incorrect sentences though, for example:
"I revel in things that’s best left unsaid."
It would be better if you wrote,
"I revel in things that are best left unsaid."
Hope I don't sound far too authoritative, I tend to cause people to misunderstand. '