Reviews for Forever In Time
zagato chapter 24 . 2/2/2019
This is beautiful and wonderful, thank you!
zagato chapter 9 . 2/2/2019
I'm guessing the bad guy is Jarrod.
zagato chapter 2 . 2/2/2019
I'm guessing Jake is some immortal or supernatural being with a very long life. Thanks!
Cough chapter 25 . 1/25/2018
Ooh, this it's amazing, thanks for the great story
gulistala chapter 24 . 9/16/2016
I know it's 5 years later but will there be a sequel to this? Officer Carter seemed mighty intent on investigating Jake. I really want to know if Carter's the new guy in town Paula mentioned and if so, what's his agenda?
gulistala chapter 23 . 9/16/2016
Is the next chapter where you pull a 'Da Vinci Code' and say 'it was all a dream?' haha.
my princess ending chapter 23 . 5/26/2016
That is so completely different than what I thought! In the beginning of this chapter, I was thinking Jake may have been some kind of angel but I never would have thought a hybrid. Especially not something related to Greek mythology. I hope Steph believes him because his evidence is pretty convincing.
my princess ending chapter 16 . 5/23/2016
What is going on is all I feel right now. I can't connect the pieces for some reason. I can't even understand what Jake is. All I know is that he's immortal and I feel like he has a split personality but he's supernatural so it has to be something more demonic other than a split personality. I don't understand and I'm trying to relate it back to the prelude. Their relationship makes me a little uncomfortable because of how Steph is in general. She's so bold when that's clearly not her personality type but I suppose it's because Jake pushes her buttons. But either way, I want to learn about their past soon.
bee chapter 1 . 2/15/2016
Hello, Charliej. Long story short, I'm in love with your story and its concept! Is it still possible that you'll write more stories like this one? How about their past lives?

Anyhoo, great work! Will keep following you!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 25 . 11/3/2015
Great story! I really did enjoy it!
MileyRowling chapter 25 . 11/25/2014
Nice work! I really liked it!
Ilsa with an I chapter 6 . 11/6/2014
Did you write this with the intention of scaring the bejeezus out of your readers? Because, if so, IT IS TOTALLY WORKING OH MY GOODNESS
Ilsa with an I chapter 3 . 11/6/2014
I want you to know that totally double checked to make sure my apartment door was locked after reading this chapter.
Ilsa with an I chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
InsertDarkNameHere chapter 25 . 9/24/2014
First off let me congradulate you on the amazing story that you have created. Your plot is intriguing with its twists and turns. You have unique characters, and your story leaves the reader guessing at the true motives and well as who the true stalker is.
Secondly, I admire the thought that you must have put into your characters and the aspects of this story. I love how everything came together at the end to create a conclusion that left no questions.
Thirdly, this has to be the longest review i have ever written. I am gladly going to go look at your profile and hope that you have another story.
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