Reviews for Withered Flower
Icestormize chapter 2 . 4/15/2011
This is great. I especially liked the last verse.
Aida Rose chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
The middle stanzas, I fell in love with. Kind of. I just wish the very last line was a bit different, and that you'll write some more poems.
KelaBelle chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Wow such a good poem, you have.

Its all nicey then it gets dark, And i love that.
FelleLLoyd chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
I like the repetition of words in the stanzas. I wish it'd be longer though. It sounds like awesome lyrics.

Happy Fun-Writing!
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
wow, i loved this poem. the general message here, everything.

you've done a great job but the rhyming restricted your words a bit. i felt like there's more to this poem.