|Reviews for Songs|
| Icestormize chapter 2 . 5/6/2011
Wow... If I had an original and a revised version, it would be very alike actually. O.O
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
I have never actually read this many poems from one author who sucessfully rhymes on every single one! Hope you don't think I'm weird, but you are truly talented.
Again, I have few little things to wave at you:
"Lines of different meaning". Maybe add an 's' onto the end of "meaning?
"and have all of the sorrow shun". Instead of "shun", maybe "shunned"? Again, I think this is grammar.
"Bright like daylight others has rung". Instead of "has", it should be "have". This is grammar.
And you've missed two apostrophes in the last line.
But seriously, brilliant work on this poem. You really got your emotions across.